Bronze

 

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Maine East
Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A movie trailer featuring a mysterious new girl who slowly terrorizes an unsuspecting student.

Judge 1

Positives: Good job of editing to the beats of the music for dramatic effect. I liked the text at the end but felt like it could have been intertwined with some footage.

Improvements: The story wasn't quite clear in regards to the description. Could have used more development of characters and a more discernible story. The lighting was minimal or didn't exist in several shots which made it difficult to see any action.

Judge 2

Positives: Great use of music and quick editing.

Improvements: The lighting makes it hard make out of the shot's intentions. I would steer clear of horror tropes like the flashlight and work on a couple shots that feel unique to you.

Judge 3

Positives: The story and tone of the film were clear and you showed a diverse variety of scenes and footage.

Improvements: The scenes were really dark at times, and the words coming up at the end felt a little slow.