Bronze

 

Are You Gonna Go My Way

Geneva
Music Video

Entry Description

One boy learns that it does not take much to get the girl.

Judge 1

Positives: Shots were great of cars Audio was at the right level

Improvements: It seemed the character was having a hard time meeting a girl until the end. Some shots were on too long.

Judge 2

Positives: Loved the song you picked, and use of music to accompany your story, great editing. Impressive use of different camera angles, and character development.

Improvements: Camera shots looked grainy, but if intentional it was fine. Plot jumped around a little at times.

Judge 3

Positives: Well edited. Cut on action and the story was cohesive and made sense. Good pacing Solid camera work, with good variance of shots

Improvements: The story felt a little repetitive after about the third time our hero gets shot down (this dude needs a better game!) If its a music video, you should try to get a bit more creative! The autoshow is going to get you a bunch of killer footage, but I could use a change of scenery or action after a while. Scenes of the band, or maybe like our hero trying to pick up girls in an another environment.