Silver

Pumpkin Patch

Waubonsie Valley

Feature Story

Entry Description

Feature Story on local pumpkin patch

Judge 1

Positives: cool b-roll good variety of interview locations

Improvements: exposure a bit dark on a few shots

Judge 2

Positives: It's always important to incorporate a wide variety of perspectives in every piece. You covered a good number of people attending the pumpkin patch. The host/interviewer introduced the subject with confidence and articulation.

Improvements: The editing could have been tightened, especially in the case of two awkwardly long shots (the one of the donkey and the final shot.) The exposure on many of the shots seemed to be balanced for the sky and not for the subjects, making them appear dim/underlit.

Judge 3

Positives: Good variety of b-roll Audio was well captured

Improvements: Editing was a bit static. Overall pace was slow.