This is an original commercial I shot and produced for my media production 2 class for Cannon. I wanted to sell this product by showing how it can be used to capture moments in everyday lives and make those moments last forever.
Positives: Story and look
Improvements: Some outside shots look 'purple'. White balance??
Positives: Nice variety of shots. Lighting looked very good. Very nice job.
Improvements: An interesting tagline would have been nice to see. Maybe tell us which specific camera you're trying to sell?
Positives: Good emotion in the shots of the girls using the product, obviously enjoying themselves. Music and images really convey happiness.
Improvements: Tighten up the so that the two major pieces, the dog and the family, are better integrated. Needs a bit more flow.