Bronze

 

Mr. Mantis Music Video

Oak Park River Forest
Music Video

Entry Description

Music video about a praying mantis.

Judge 1

Positives: Opening shot started off well.

Improvements: Video lacked a story line. Overuse of effects.

Judge 2

Positives: Fun! Liked your choice of music track. Good edit. Nice attempt at getting some good close ups, which I am sure was not easy.

Improvements: Try and steady that camera. Watch your focus and especially exposure. Manual focus, exposure and white balance will help in the future.

Judge 3

Positives: Creative idea. Good choice of song. FX were great.

Improvements: A few shots were overexposed - perhaps intentionally? Maybe more variety - not every shot w/ the "creatures".