Music video about a praying mantis.
Positives: Opening shot started off well.
Improvements: Video lacked a story line. Overuse of effects.
Positives: Fun! Liked your choice of music track. Good edit. Nice attempt at getting some good close ups, which I am sure was not easy.
Improvements: Try and steady that camera. Watch your focus and especially exposure. Manual focus, exposure and white balance will help in the future.
Positives: Creative idea. Good choice of song. FX were great.
Improvements: A few shots were overexposed - perhaps intentionally? Maybe more variety - not every shot w/ the "creatures".