Bronze

Asian Hummus Tempeh Stir Fry

Lyons Township

Demonstration

Entry Description

This is a How To video for making Asian Hummus Tempeh Stir Fry.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice visual catalog of the ingredients. This way we get the names and how they look. Very easy to follow. Liked the PoV over the shoulder.

Improvements: Some shote were out of focus. The rolling oil was also distracting. Dialog cam in a bit late and lighting is inconsistent.

Judge 2

Positives: good job introducing all the materials needed. good job with showin how to properly cut all the ingredients

Improvements: change music in parts to add more variety to the sound. avoid reflective surfaces for shooting overhead shots.

Judge 3

Positives: Great content and very thorough cooking instructions. Nice variety of shots

Improvements: Voice over sound is not integrated into the whole story it starts abruptly... Sound of the video ends abruptly in the end of the video... there is no smooth fade out.... Camera is shaking ... Type could be set a bit better, with bigger tracking in a more legible typeface. Lighting could be significantly improved.