Bronze

Be Kind

Oswego East

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This PSA displays how it pays to be kind to others during passing period at school.

Judge 1

Positives: The "Help" song was amusing.

Improvements: I wasn't thrilled with this topic. I also thought the "fall" looked fake. I really did NOT like the skipping at the end. Sorry, it looked silly to me.

Judge 2

Positives: Sweet concept.

Improvements: Edited needs improvement...quite a few flash frames. And a little confusing as to the point of the psa in the beginning.

Judge 3

Positives: Use of music is helpful.

Improvements: Needs better topic and stronger script.