Bronze

"Cardinal Beats: Cookies and Cream

Eisenhower

Commercial

Entry Description

A teacher is wearing the cardinal beats and doesn't realize that her students are causing chaos in the library.

Judge 1

Positives: Good concept.

Improvements: Last shot with window in background should have been planned better. The bright light from the window works against the overall lighting of the scene.

Judge 2

Positives: Audio was nice and clean.Good editing.

Improvements: They don't have to go back and forth with "cookie" and "cream" so many times before chaos erupts.

Judge 3

Positives: Fun concept. Very creative.

Improvements: The shots are too long. It needed to build up much faster.