Gold

"It's Like a Party in your Head"

Eisenhower

Commercial

Entry Description

The commercial is about how the cardinal beats are so good with sound, and how loud they are.

Judge 1

Positives: I enjoyed the overall concept of a party in your head.

Improvements: Editing at the beginning is a bit rough and I thought we were on the close shot too long.

Judge 2

Positives: good job making sure the headphones were the center of attention. Good editing.

Improvements: Use more variety of camera angles. Use of more/different shots especially during the "Harlem Shake" part would be effective.

Judge 3

Positives: I loved the concept. Very entertaining

Improvements: Watch your jump cuts. Tighten up your edits a little bit.