This is a commercial for the well known sports brand Nike.
Positives: Fast-paced with a clear message.
Improvements: Closing shot was blue... should have attempted a fix in post. Video should include nat-sound.
Positives: Some good cutting and shot selection.
Improvements: Lighting was a little funky at times (looked blue). Some of the wide shots lasted too long.
Positives: Nice effects. Good editing.
Improvements: Take a little bit more time to set up your shots so that the lighting is optimal. With music this fast having more shots would enhance the end product.