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Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This video shows how many young girls and boys everyday are affected from the media. They struggle with the thoughts in their head of not knowing whether they meet society's standards or not. This video shows that you are beautiful without society's opinion.

Judge 1

Positives: I liked the creativity and the montage.

Improvements: I think the script was too wordy and not sharp enough. I also don't believe in blaming anyone (or anything including the media) for one's behavior. Also... please try to improve your grammar. The summary had a lot of errors.

Judge 2

Positives: LOVE the I Am Beautiful signs. Great concept.

Improvements: A little wordy...lost my attention for a second.

Judge 3

Positives: Important message. Many of the thoughts and creative ideas of how and what to shoot are clever and well thoughtout.

Improvements: The grammar is poor. Even the paragraph explaining what is to come is poorly written. Must learn better writing skills to go with creative ideas.