Elk Grove junior builds a clock from scratch - ID# 10

Elk Grove High School

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In this video, Julia Grin walks us through her process of building her own clock from scratch as a part of a passion project. Video shot and edited by Savannah May and Palak Patel.

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• 4/25 10:16 pm - Interesting piece. Consider shot composition carefully. Lots of headroom on your interview subject. Camera is jumpy and out of focus in parts of broll. Audio is a little rough in opening. Subject's voice gets "froggy" at one point. Cut the take, allow them to clear their throat and get a new take.
• 4/1 1:45 pm - Audio is rough in the beginning and the framing seems slanted. Feels like a NAT sot piece instead of a package

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