Moleskin: Write Your Future - ID# 10
Glenbrook North
Commercial
Entry Description
Commercial showcasing Moleskin journals
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/24 11:55 am - I like the different perspectives shown and story. I agree with the other teacher about showing the exterior of the notebook.
- 3/4 6:34 am - I love how you really emphasized the more than a journal aspect. I would maybe show the exterior of the journal, so customers can see what they look like upon purchase.
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