Homecoming Special - ID# 105
Wheaton North
School Promotion
Entry Description
This is an advertisement for the 2024 Wheaton North homecoming dance. It features Nathan Abon and Naomi-Ruth Westberg. The music is Charlie’s Blues (Alternate) by Vince Guaraldi.
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- 3/4 11:30 am - POSITIVES: Fun & Funky 80's vibe with the aspect ratio & color correction. Simple Story with steady camera work & conveys the Hoco Ticket info. Wardrobe supports the story, too! Nice payoff at the end with the turn-down. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: This is an amusing piece. It takes awhile to get to the point, and uses some long clips (which may have been a style choice). But because though there's no action in the shots, including some cut in shots of the "no activity" would make the time pass in a more engaging way (perhaps getting up close & with the character's angst) and would help hold the audience.
- 3/3 9:57 pm - Fun way to promote your hoco dance. CTA takes a while to get to but it is surely there at the end. Clean shots throughout.
- 2/18 7:51 am - Thought the costume choice (happiness is a sad song) was fitting for being turned down - nice touch It did take a while to get to the message
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