CPR Student's Story - ID# 105
Neuqua Valley
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Entry Description
Almost every student at Neuqua Valley is certified in CPR during their freshman year, a simple skill that saves lives. One student at Neuqua had to put their skills to use last Spring break. Here is the story she told for Neuqua's news program, Wildcat Weekly.
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- 3/12 11:45 am - The story had some really good visuals and broll - it needed more natural sound weaved into the story. The person you chose had a great story to tell but she didn't come across very genuinely - her delivery was a bit flat and sounded scripted and not authentic. Be careful of flash frames. The framing was nice and the audio was very good. It was a creative attempt at telling the story
- 3/6 12:08 pm - Great content about an important story!! Work on storytelling structure. This would be even more impactful if the reporter wrote lines leading into sots, rather than simply let your source tell the entire story. Break up that interview. Never use "Hi" or "thank you" in a taped package. Missing broll of the event is hard to deal with. What could you have used to cover her long sound bite instead?
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