"Ribs" - Lorde - ID# 127
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Music Video
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Music video for Lorde's "Ribs"
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- 2/24 1:20 pm - You picked a strong song choice that goes hand-in-hand with the themes you're going for here. I do think that while you have some strong variety of shots edited to the beats of the music, the lighting and audio parts get distracting toward the end. The story is there and relatable for your audience, but there are also times where the lip-synching seems off or not paced correctly with the song's rhythm. It's a nice piece thought that makes an effort to tell a powerful story.
- 2/21 2:02 pm - This music video opens with powerful shots of hallways and sidewalks, immediately setting a strong visual tone. However, within the first 30 seconds, there's a risk of losing the viewer's attention, potentially due to pacing or lack of immediate engagement. Additionally, there are some moments where the lip-syncing appears slightly off, which could detract from the overall viewing experience. Despite these initial challenges, the video's editing prowess comes to the forefront around the one-minute mark. From this point onward, the editing becomes more polished and visually captivating, drawing viewers deeper into the narrative. The skillful arrangement of clips and transitions adds depth and intrigue, transforming the video into a compelling visual journey. Overall, while the video may have a slow start and minor issues with lip-syncing, its strengths lie in its editing finesse and ability to captivate viewers with engaging visuals. With its captivating moments and polished editing, it ultimately succeeds in leaving a lasting impression on its audience.
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