How to be a Performative Male - ID# 129
Glenbrook South
Demonstration
Entry Description
Comedic demonstration teaching viewers how to be a performative male.
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- 4/21 6:45 pm - Performers did a good job with their roles. Good moving camera shots. Good low angle shot at 39 seconds. Keep producing more videos.
- 2/23 12:47 pm - CAMERA: the host and white board could have been broken up into multiple shots (full shots of both, close ups of the host talking to camera). LIGHTING: the lighting could have been better for the host and white board. SOUND: sound was rough. A bit overmodulated in parts. Outside sound also had a lot of ambient noise (traffic, wind). You could have also used some music to accentuate the scenes in the video, or even some sound effects when the guy's attempts failed. Adding those sound elements could have helped drive the humor. STORY: the idea is funny, but the execution could have been better.
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