Hauser Jr. High Parking Lot - ID# 134
Riverside Brookfield
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Entry Description
Hauser Jr. High’s new parking lot and playground offer spacious, safe areas for all.
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- 2/26 1:15 pm - Opening with a long pan shot isn't ideal. Maybe some ariel or wide, medium, tight combo. You want to try to match the B-roll with what you are saying. We see bikes when there is no mention of bikes. The B-roll seems very random, and it goes off-topic at times. It flashes back and forth from the interview in a frantic fashion.
- 2/21 2:35 pm - - Started off strong with good shots and then it got a little random with the broll over the interviews - The 2nd interview seemed out of focus - I thought it was too long - The story was a solid idea but the piece dragged on a bit
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