MMEA Fest

A student is getting chased by an unknown creature because the student possesses a calculator which controls space and time.

4/24 11:18 pm - The music is chaotic in a chilling, effective way—it really sets the tone. The text font fits the style well, but be sure to double-check grammar and spelling. Small errors can distract the audience and take away from the credibility of your work. Visually, it’s well shot and the narrative seems interesting and layered. I’m all for fun and experimental choices, but personally, the stuffed animal shots pulled me out of the psychological thriller vibe you were building. If it was meant as humor, it might’ve clashed a bit too much with the otherwise eerie atmosphere. Overall, a strong concept, just keep an eye on tone consistency and polish the details to really make it shine!
4/24 2:22 pm - The song choice and then editing to the beat with a lot of your editing choices helped to give it that trailer feel and format, and with the words helping tell the plot points. Now, because the first word is misspelled, this can pull your audience out of the flow of your story before it even begins well, so have multiple people check your edit. It's easy to miss things like that. Some shots that were enjoyable (maybe not the best word) were the arm of the person falling to the ground, and the running to the locked gate. So, you've got some elements and ideas here that work well and help push the story.

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