Homecoming Spirit Days - ID# 136
Glenbrook South
School Promotion Non Sports
Entry Description
A video promoting the school homecoming spirit week with fun themes for each day.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 11:54 am - Fun promo that has an inferred CTA of promoting the idea of everyone participating in the HOCO spirit themed dress up days, I like the way you changed the vibe and tone of each spirit day. It does feel a bit long and I wonder if you could get that same message out there while cutting it way back. Lastly, the end just kind of cuts off. Keep working!
- 3/6 9:05 am - Liked that short intro bump with the 8-bit old school video game music, that grabbed my attention. Addtionally, each of the music clips that you decided to use were familiar and also had me locked in on the information that you're showcasing for homecoming week. I Thought all the scenes that you shot each day were done well, some humor in there for sure and I'm betting that captured your audience's attention. I don't have much in the way of criticism for this piece as I felt it was pretty well-done. I guess the only thing that you might consider is to tighten up the whole piece? It runs almost 2-mins and I get that you've got a lot of information to show but also realize how short everyone's attention spans last? You did alter clip speed in some of the edits so I think that keeping it shorter and concise was defintiely on your mind. Overall, this is a good promo and it does what it's supposed to!
Judge 1
Positives: music intro interesting at beginning with gaming music GReat story line and depiction of dress up days great variety of settings representing all aspects of the school
Improvements: Really fun! Enjoyed the non-use of dialogue - maybe could have helped
Judge 2
Positives: Changing the music for each spirit day is a smart creative choice and gives the video real energy and variety. The footage for most of the days captures the fun and theme well, and the overall concept is solid for a homecoming promo.
Improvements: The opening transition from the homecoming title card to the first spirit day happens really fast, both visually and with the audio, and it needs a beat to breathe before jumping in. Monday's section runs a little long with the Sorry footage. It's a fun idea for a color shirt day but the clip overstays its welcome and slows the momentum. The text overlays throughout could use some polish too. The concept is right but the execution feels a little rough and some cleanup there would go a long way toward making this feel finished.
Judge 3
Positives: How much fun! It was dynamic. It was creative. You captured the entire week in just a few minutes completely. Totally enjoyable. The music choices were impeccably brilliant.
Improvements: To top this off, it would have been great to see a huge final scene. Something to wrap-up the whole week. Otherwise, it was smiles from ear to ear throughout!
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