A satirical comedic PSA about the state of gun violence within modern day America.
Positives: The changing of the camera angles worked well to make a statement about the absurdity of the data. The lighting and how the talent was blocked looked great. The audio levels were consistent. The gunshot at the end was a great idea.
Improvements: Graphics at the end could be in the title safe area and could have been up a bit longer.
Positives: 1-The laugh track at the end was a nice added touch to the satire. The stamping of the end panel was jarring (in a good way) being edited off the game show host.
Improvements: I thought a simple message deserved a simply edited piece, so not much can be improved but if I must comment: 1 - the answers could have come faster and faster until all you hear is a BUZZ 2 - The music could have continued for mood purposes.
Positives: The use of sound effects was strong and supported the story being told. The lighting and set were clean and realistic to a game show environment. The overall tone and message being told was strong and visuals held the viewers attention.
Improvements: The longer shot of the host towards the end started to become out of focus as the camera was zooming in. Also, the host did not show a ton of emotion during this long shot and having long hair in his face did not help convey any emotion. The Call to action at the end had a strong statement but no guidance to the viewer what to do next (ie go to a website, sign a petition, etc.).
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