Join Wheeling Baseball - ID# 133
Wheeling High School
School Promotion
Entry Description
Come to a baseball open gym before we start the season. Anyone is welcome, and no experience is necessary.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/24 3:25 pm - You did a great job with the text and animation in this baseball promotion video! You used the photos in a creative way, and the music choice was appropriate. My only wish is that there was video in place of the photos! The ending slide text is a little difficult to read, partly due the color/font choice and partly due to the overuse of punctuation. Overall, it is a good promotional video for the upcoming baseball games.
- 4/23 2:53 pm - STORY: You provide your audience with all the essential information needed to advertise the baseball open gyms! Well thought out! SOUND: I think your music bed is mixed in well! One thing I would suggest is to actually include SFX of a bat hitting a baseball, shoes on dirt, crowd cheering. That can add a lot more to your video rather than only having music throughout the whole piece. CAMERA: I think you have a variety of photos that you include from different angles which is great! I think it would be nice to see some close up shots of a baseball or a bat, or something with a greater depth of field to make the image more interesting. I think this promo could benefit from having some video clips rather than just using pictures. Maybe consider including clips from a baseball game/practice. LIGHTING: Overall, I would say the lighting in the photos is good. In the photo at 0:16, the player’s sleeve is blown out! Something to watch out for. EDITING: Overall the video looks very nice with the graphics and movements included! Great pacing as well! The one thing I would do differently is the ending slide. It is difficult to read the dates and times and it looks a little confusing. I would also try to match it to the theme from the rest of the video. If there could have been a bigger variety of video clips I think this would make this video a little stronger!
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