EG Winter Sports - ID# 14
Elk Grove High School
School Promotion
Entry Description
Promoting winter sports at Elk Grove High School.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/24 8:56 pm - This definitely makes students aware of winter sports and made me laugh. However, little information is given. Who are the sponsors/coaches? There is little shot variation? There are a couple of typos throughout.
- 3/4 12:42 pm - POSITIVES: You covered a lot of locations, raising awareness about the range of activities out there. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: I'm sure students laughed, but this looks like it was thrown together pretty quickly. Very little shot variety, and there's a typo at the end, so Proofread.
- 2/19 8:30 am - -probably got some laughs from students for the creativity -sponsors spelled wrong at the end -creative way to showcase all of the winter sports -good information
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