4/28 8:51 pm - The presenter clearly explained the necessary ingredients. Music selection works well with the images you recorded for the project. Good use of fast motion. Voice-overs are well done. Keep producing more videos.
2/23 1:43 pm - CAMERA: camera opening shot was not level. No close ups of the ingredients. Camera work was a bit shaky; should use tripod.
The video for a demonstration should always show the finished product. In your case, the finished plate of nachos should have been shown from 2-3 different angles, well lit, stable (not shaky) and cleanly in focus. This was not the case.
EDITING: speeding up the footage makes the shaky camera look more shaky and frantic. It's better to show 3-5 seconds of a close up.
LIGHTING: the lighting and overall exposure was fine.
AUDIO: your voice over was okay but the music levels were too loud. Your voice overs and primary audio should be between -6 and -12 on the VU meter, and your music beds should be between -18 and -24 on the VU meter.