Always in Style - ID# 146
Geneva
Commercial
Entry Description
A commercial about a local consignment shop in Geneva
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 5:41 pm - Very well executed commercial! I feel you could have started the video a bit slower to provide a more comprehensive establishing shot. I could tell it was a store, but if you slow it down, it will draw me in a bit more. Then you can throw in your great shots after this and have it continue matching that audio like you did. The ending was a bit abrupt, so maybe have a better landing zone in your audio. Maybe a longer fade? Overall, great commercial!
- 3/3 7:45 am - Really solid edits! I love the pacing of the video as it lines up with the beat of the song. Clear camera angles and variety of shots that really makes it engaging. I'd maybe add a little bit more time at the end of the video so that the audience can see which shop it's for, just felt the screen with the store name at the end came and went pretty quickly. Otherwise, solid video, great song choice, really captures the vibe of this place.
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