Mental Health and Wellness - ID# 147
Huntley
News Package
Entry Description
News package showcasing the Mental Health and Wellness Fair
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/3 11:44 am - Very well done lead stand-up in his. You look and sound very confident and lay out what we are about to hear. Whoops, you have a jump cut right in the middle of the first interview; cover that with a b-roll so the viewer doesn't notice. The soundbite is too long, and some of the b-roll isn't that interesting, including a long aimless pan shot around 45 in. This is basically a long string of soundbites, not really a news package. Informational, but doesn't fit the category.
- 2/21 2:39 pm - - First SOT – too much headroom, looks a bit slanted, and she’s looking up - A lot of jump cuts - Soundbites were exceptionally long and listed a lot of items instead of having good content - Interviews were either looking directly looking into the camera or looking away a lot - Pan of the room was too long - Some jump cuts - Needed nats of the room - Shots were pretty good using a broadcast camera - Audio was good - Subject matter was interesting
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