Veterans Day - ID# 149
Huntley
News Package
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News package showcasing the annual Veterans Day breakfast
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- 2/26 1:30 pm - The opening standup sounded good. The interview isn't following the rule of 3rds. The narration in the middle sounds like it is still filmed outside with the wind in the background. The stinger inside the package and the jump cuts in the interview don't look right. The info was good in the story.
- 2/21 2:37 pm - - Creative use of video in beginning soundbite - I am not sure that I loved the people looking directly into the camera for the interviews - Jump cut during 2nd person interviewed - Needed more nats - Felt a little like play by play of what was happening instead of effective storytelling - The story was informative, I learned something new about the rifle
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