EG Orchesis Promo - ID# 15
Elk Grove High School
School Promotion
Entry Description
Promotion of EG Orchesis "Allure" show.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 10:14 pm - Ths promo definitely has a call to action! You tell the viewer exactly what you want them to do and when you want them to do i!! Vary the shots, get creative with your composition, type and length of shots.
- 3/4 12:35 pm - POSITIVES: Nice match-up of B-roll with the different dance styles, and sometimes you left the right amount of room in the shot for the type. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: Predominantly long shots of the actual dances, some with way too much head room or foot room. But more B-roll of actual dancing would make this piece stronger. Overall feels choppy and never really found a flow.
- 2/18 1:26 pm - -Good job finding footage that matched the description/information -Informational -The text felt rushed and sometimes out of place -Text/message felt a bit basic/unprofessional
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