3/5 11:55 am - I didn't know anything about the players shown in the video so I wasn't certain what the video was about. If it's a football promo video, I think it should show us more promoting the team as a whole - their record, the team playing, their sportsmanship, etc....
3/4 10:27 am - Well shot video and nicely edited, but the story is lacking in that unless you told us in the entry description, we wouldn't know they are undefeated...or what team this is. If the video is meant to promote the team then maximize that by including graphics, dates, logos, game times, etc. Use a great video like this to drive people to your socials, YouTube page, or the next game!