Art-O-Mat - ID# 157
Maine South
News Package
Entry Description
Follow WMTH Reporter Nicole Scimeca as she explores a hot, new craze: the Art-O-Mat.
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- 3/3 11:49 am - Hmm, this is very interesting and modern. It is beautifully edited and really well produced. The first minute feels more like an info dive (a well done one) and then we finally get to the package part of this when the interviews start. This is a pretty well told story and super interesting. The visuals support the story tremendously. I don't love when a reporter makes themselves part of the story, but at least it was done well. It felt first person, but that also can be an effective story telling skill. The interview isn't mic'd that well as he does sound hollow and distant. I don't completely understand the NC headquarter part of the story and how this comes to be. Is this a business, and who is profiting, and why are they doing it? Is this about the artists or the machine maker or the vendor?
- 2/28 3:11 pm - -It's a beautiful package, love the animation, but where's the news story? -Not a traditional news package, but more of a personality-style feature for a magazine show -Not sure it fits the category -felt very promotional and non-newsy with reporter inserting self. That said, flawlessly edited.
- 2/21 2:39 pm - - Excellent editing, storytelling, great shots
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