I Remember You by Masayoshi Takanaka - ID# 158
Highland Park
Music Video
Entry Description
A travel montage music video of a boy's journey through Japan, set to the melodies of Masayoshi Takanaka's "I Remember You".
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 2/24 9:31 am - Really impressive music video with amazing shots, lighting, and clarity. The music video tells a really cool story through these shots and how much variety they have. I really enjoyed the sequences after 1:15 or so with the lighting and backdrops. Really clear technical shots that helps to enhance the setting. I can tell you were very meticulous in getting the kinds of shots that you got, and it shows. Well done!
- 2/21 10:00 am - This music video grabs attention right from the start with its distinctive opening scene set inside a train in Japan. The sight of passengers holding on as the train journeys to its next destination creates an intriguing and dynamic introduction, immediately immersing viewers into the video's world. The use of natural sound further enhances the authenticity of the scene, adding a layer of realism that resonates with audiences. Throughout the video, there is a consistent display of visually captivating shots, thoughtfully chosen color schemes, and well-paced editing. Each frame feels meticulously crafted, contributing to the overall aesthetic appeal and enhancing the viewer's engagement with the content. One of the standout qualities of this video is its creativity and originality. From the unique setting to the innovative visual storytelling techniques, it's evident that the creators have put considerable thought and effort into delivering a truly memorable and distinctive viewing experience. In conclusion, this music video is a testament to the talent and vision of its creators. I thoroughly enjoyed the creativity and originality displayed, and I eagerly anticipate seeing what they have in store for future projects. Keep up the excellent work!
Judge 1
Positives: Social media Success: The format and style of this video are highly suitable for platforms like TikTok and other social media outlets, where content that showcases filmmaking skills tends to engage a wide audience. If you haven't already explored this avenue, it's highly recommended to share your work on these platforms to reach a broader and appreciative audience as this is the format widely accepted. Diverse Shot Selection: The variety of shots included in the video, ranging from landscapes to close-ups, adds a rich texture and depth to the viewing experience. This diversity not only keeps the audience engaged but also gives a well-rounded feel to the video, making it appear more polished. The ability to incorporate a wide range of visuals effectively speaks to your versatility and creativity as a filmmaker. (Shot at 1:18 is incredible)
Improvements: Story Development: While the video excels visually, it falls short in terms of narrative depth. The lack of a clear story or plot makes it challenging for viewers to connect with the video beyond its aesthetic qualities. Developing a more defined storyline could enhance the video's impact by adding emotional weight and context to the visuals, making it not just a treat for the eyes but also a memorable journey for the viewer. Audio Timing: Incorporating the song and sound effects a bit earlier in the video, possibly in a muffled tone to maintain the dramatic effect, could elevate the opening moments. This adjustment would help in setting the tone right from the start, creating an immediate connection with the audience and building anticipation for what's to come.
Judge 2
Positives: This is ridiculously well shot. Pro-level. Beautiful compositions, beautiful use of depth of field, beautiful color/color correction. I especially loved the Lost in Translationy last shot. The fact that this was shot on an iphone is just silly. The cinematographer for this piece has a bright future as a pro.
Improvements: I'm not sure this is a music video. It's more a travelogue, and as such, I don't get much story or concept besides pretty (ok, gorgeous) pictures. An actual music performance might have helped (which might have meant a different song--as it stands the song is pretty non-descript).
Judge 3
Positives: Is this found footage or did one of the filmmakers shoot this footage? Some of the shots are exquisite. The video feels consistent in terms of look.
Improvements: The editing rhythm needs to be more consistent. Some of the edits don't make sense in terms of storytelling. How can this "travel montage" tell more of the protagonist's journey?
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