MUN’s New Leadership Model - ID# 151
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The Model UN Club adopted a new leadership model this year. Rather than singling out opportunities exclusively for senior members, the new model enables hard-working and committed students to lead the program, regardless of seniority.
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- 3/12 2:16 pm - Unfortunately when I went back to take another look to give more extensive feedback, the video did not load so going off my initial notes - it was a well shot story and informative. I felt the story was a bit long for the subject matter itself not having a lot of depth. There was a long silence (from what I noted) and the interview framing was a bit off. Nice job overall
- 3/6 1:46 pm - Beautifully shot and edited! Your technical skills are strong. Those are the strengths. Your storytelling could be even improved with tighter edits on your sots. For instance, start you first sound bite a little later, so your source doesn't repeat what the reporter just said. Some of the sots run very long. It's more engaging and improves pacing to break those up. You have a nice, clear ending with the applause. Good choice!
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