Distracted Driving PSA - ID# 152
Glenbrook North
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
Safe driving is always important, but especially during Halloween when kids are out for treat or treating.
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- 4/30 2:25 pm - The music does a great job setting the tone right from the start. It is interesting how the PSA keeps the topic unclear until the car scene, which adds a bit of buildup. Adding a few close up shots of the driver and better timing the moment when the ghost steps onto the road could make the accident feel more convincing. The message at the end is strong and ties everything together nicely. Overall, good work!
- 4/28 1:05 pm - Your context and world-building shots were amazing, really nice work with the initial Trick or Treating. Your work with the audio and the conflict coming in with the car worked well. I would suggest slowing down the initial Phone Distraction scene, getting more close-up shots to really emphasize the distraction and how we’re not able to see the road anymore. This would allow us to have more suspense from the audience perspective. You’re on the right track, keep it up!
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