The ARC - ID# 152
Deerfield
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Entry Description
While the ARC (Academic Resource Center) is a free tool for tutoring in all subjects for students, not students know about it or take advantage of its services. Some students even choose the "private" option - the off-campus tutor instead of the school's ARC.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 2/28 11:42 am - The script needs a little restructuring. Try to mingle more reporter vo tracks to break up the long string of sots. Great job at framing the interviews! Shooting was the strength here. :) Just needs more variety of shots and more interesting visuals. This is a tough story to get great visuals for based on the content.
- 2/26 12:26 pm - Try to avoid pan shots as they aren't really don't help in this story. Try a combo of wide, medium, and tight next time. The reporter track is clear but maybe bring a little more energy. The B-roll in this story doesn't really match the narration that I am hearing. The interviews are well-framed, and the audio is strong. It sounds like the second student interview is almost saying why not go to the ARC,
- 2/21 2:28 pm - - Very jumpy edits and shots - The broll was repetitive and too many pans - Track was very long in the beginning - Edit wasn’t tight - Framing of some interviews were good - Good number of interviews and different perspectives - Felt too long Overall the package was informative but it didn’t feel quite balanced and it dragged on longer than it needed to.
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