Snakes in the Editing Lab III - ID# 166

Morton East
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Just when you thought they were gone snakes invade the editing lab again! Snakes in the Editing Lab III, a cutting-edge thriller that will rattle your spine.

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  • 4/23 12:18 pm - This was a lot of fun. For starters, your camera shots were great and showed a sense of your skill level, nice work. Moving forward, add some movement and some reaction shots to really level-up your footage. The stop-motion was a great effect and definitely took a lot of effort. Your voice-over throughout also helped tell the story. The only issue was that it was a bit too goofy. When thinking of digital shorts these days, we have to match the humour with some professional filming and editing. Keep up the great work, you're off to a good start!
  • 2/22 11:13 am - Made me smile. Cute! oops - mic pop at :49. Voice over could be clearer- keep your mouth 4-6 inches from the mic. More creative camera work would've helped. For instance, at 1:10, have the camera pull in close, or pull out.
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