A girl, going about her day alone...or is she? Watch as she tries to live for tomorrow.
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4/24 2:18 pm - This video was fun and has a lot of potential. You have some great shots and did a nice job with avoiding just wide shots, nice work.
A couple critiques:
- having her captured and then trying to escape but also having so many people and traffic in the background took me out of the story.
- When using headlines, try just having a news anchor voiceover or maybe a radio alert, or try to create a news clipping with "missing person" on it. Even making a missing person poster and filming someone taping it up would work just find.
- Avoid voiceover of the narrator adding additional emotions
Overall, you have a great start here. Keep up the good work!