A step by step demonstration on how to voice, record, and edit radio liners.
Positives: The editing is overall very strong. The graphics are well done and contribute to cohesive feel to the video.The pacing of the cuts match well with breaks in ideas/steps. The dialogue is well recorded and the sound design emphasizes what is being said. It "shows" what is being described and adds a layer that keeps the viewer engaged and makes it clear what is being done.
Improvements: The music choice is a little distracting. It does play into the style of the piece, but it competes for the viewer's attention because of how up tempo it is and how high it is in the mix. The video is showing how to do something that is a very audtioroy process, but the cuts between the two shots of the talent doesn't add any new information and gets repetitive. More variety, or even showing what messing with the effects on the editing program looks like could further enhance the story.
Positives: -Good personality and pacing. -Great energy and command. -Thanks for showing sound FX in editing portion, terrific examples.
Improvements: -Watch the shadow on your
Positives: Nice, fast paced how-to. You did a great job mixing in other visuals. Very solid script and narration. I like how you spoke the words and typed them.
Improvements: Voice seemed out of synch, ADR? Cuts seemed a little jarring at times. Some background information would have helped context. What's a liner? Why are they called that?
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