Children's Show/Theatre Lineup - ID# 175
Neuqua Valley
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Entry Description
Neuqua Valley starts off its theatre season with a successful production of "The Spell of Sleeping Beauty" and prepares for numerous more shows for the upcoming year.
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- 4/1 12:59 pm - Well shot, well told story. Needed more nats in teh beginning. I liked how you moved the graphic but I did feel like it was a bit too long.
- 3/4 10:38 pm - A nice informative piece to let your school audience know all about your theatre production lineup. Some good broll throughout. A couple of suggestions...at times, drop the audio level of the broll and include it in the PKG to give it some life. Also, who is the person being interviewed? The talent's audio is in both L/R tracks but your interviewee's audio is only in the L channel. Make sure to fill both channels with audio. Lastly, when using graphics, try to find a way to make them more engaging. Keep working!
- 3/2 8:15 pm - Started well, good lead into the SOT but who is he? 2nd and 3rd SOT too long, paraphrase or summarize and lead that to a 10 to 12-sec SOT. Who is the lady at the 54-second mark? More paraphrase or summarize than SOT.
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