Teenage Dream - ID# 176
Neuqua Valley
Music Video
Entry Description
Original music video based on a concept I created. This music video follows the story of a girl who navigates the ups and downs of her teenage years. As she grows up, she realizes the challenges that come with it. She constantly fears not living up to her self-imposed standards and the possibility of never reaching her full potential. In the end, however, although her life does not go exactly as she envisioned, she is okay and happy. This music video serves as a message to people who worry about making the most of their teenage years, showing that it's okay and very normal to not live up to your perceived "teenage dream".
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 2/24 9:13 am - I really find it interesting that you had a unique narrative and storytelling angle. It made the feelings of nostalgia and growing up more prevalent and tangible. One thing I would suggest is some editing techniques and change-up of shots. I would suggest changing some lighting, as some shots are hard to see what's going on. I like the depth that you have to the emotional elements of the story, but make sure that your visual editing is more refined. Keep up the hard work and know that you are on the right track!
- 2/21 9:11 am - This music video impressively utilizes found or recreated old footage to weave a compelling narrative, effectively telling a story that resonates with viewers. The use of historical footage adds depth and authenticity to the storytelling, enriching the overall viewing experience. One area for improvement highlighted in the video is the lighting, which often appears dark or backlit. Incorporating better lighting techniques, such as using additional sources like cell phone lights, can enhance the visibility of subjects and scenes, capturing the moment more effectively. The contrast is evident in scenes like the one featuring the two girls sitting in front of the computer, where the illumination from the screen adds a natural and engaging brightness. Similarly, the bathroom scene with the mirror showcases effective lighting, resulting in visually appealing footage that adds to the video's aesthetic appeal. The montage towards the end, featuring overlays of video, is a visually captivating sequence that holds the viewer's attention. It adds depth and complexity to the storytelling, leaving a lasting impression. Overall, this music video appears to have been a labor of love, capturing the essence of the teenage experience with authenticity and flair. I'm eager to see how the creators continue to evolve and innovate in their future projects. Keep up the great work!
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