4/30 6:04 pm - This was a unique way to selling the product. The choice of having the audio begin with the eating of the cereal was a good choice. I feel it took too long to get there though. Maybe a few other shots edited to be closer together, could have achieved this. Keep on going with these ideas and storytelling
2/26 2:32 pm - I think this is a great product to advertise for a student audience. To boost this project, however, the audio would also be something I'd consider to liven up a bit, especially in a commercial. I thought it was a good idea to have the music start playing when the cereal was actually tasted, but I felt that the commercial could have used a wider variety of angles and cuts to tell this story than what was displayed. Keep working hard!