VBC Diaries - ID# 187
Homewood-Flossmoor
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
A reality show following the VBC staff while making their state projects.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 1:57 pm - Fun concept and well done. Everything was shot and edited well for comedic timing. Some of the jokes did seem a little bit like inside jokes that the audience wouldn't understand. I hope that this is an ongoing series for your school.
- 4/24 11:46 am - Good production value with sets, graphics and editing. Well-paced. Nice job parodying reality shows like this. Funny ending. Maybe too many in-jokes for a general audience, but not bad. This would be a fun promo for the video program at your school.
- 4/21 1:49 pm - Good editing at the beginning of the video to catch the viewer's attention. Music selection works well with the images you recorded. Good use of sound effects. Good variety of different camera angles throughout the video. Editing is well done. Keep producing more videos.
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