HF Hype Promotion - ID# 206
Homewood-Flossmoor
School Promotion
Entry Description
The hype of Homewood Flossmoor High School!
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 7:10 pm - STORY: This video does a great job showcasing a lot of different events that happen at your school! You provide a lot of that information through the various camera shots you include! SOUND: I think you do a great job mixing in your music bed. Something that would add to the video would be sound from the actual clips that you use. And these can be turned up very faintly. But it would be nice to hear the crowd cheering, people conversing, instruments playing. I think it would give your video that extra something rather than just hearing the music throughout the whole thing. CAMERA: I appreciate the variety of camera shots that you use. It really demonstrates your knowledge of composition! LIGHTING: Great use of lighting in all of your clips! EDITING: I really appreciate all of the edits you made to the beat of the song. It really keeps that high energy going throughout the whole video!
- 4/25 1:16 pm - This a great quick, high-energy school promotion video! It's a montage of school events and you did a good job carefully selecting the shots to use and making them match the beat of the song. This video would also work well as an open to a broadcast! Overall, great job!
Judge 1
Positives: great showcase of a wide variety of sports/activities from wrestling to band quick editing style helped keep viewer interest
Improvements: Narrative voice or quotes from individuals? Lighting a little erratic at times
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Judge 3
Positives: Good editing and pacing at the start of the video. The selection of music and the way the edit was cutting on the beat of the music was very effective. There are a lot of action shots that helped to generate interest in the video. You didn't stay on any single shot too long. That helped to keep interest going through the video.
Improvements: Here are couple of things that I feel would help to make this even better. The first few shots are a much lower resolution that most of the video. You can either cut these out completely or come up with anyway to create smaller boxes of video that would be on the screen at the same time. Then keep the scale of those shots to 100%. Think about adding some graphics that will help to define the objective of your project.If your audience isn't familiar with Homewood Flossmoor High School football, they may not get that this is a promotion for them.
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