Jon Elfner | Our American Stories | - ID# 207

Homewood-Flossmoor

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A story featuring Homewood-Flossmoor's very own historian, Jon Elfner, and how he shares unique historical stories throughout the country!

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• 4/25 11:14 pm - We hear a lot from the reporter. Talk less. Set up the story and then let the subjects and broll tell the story. Some good broll throughout. Reporter audio and music track is good. Try to always have a mic on you interview subjects. Hold your camera steady. Choose your interview locations carefully (especially man in yellow jacket). Interesting piece...lots of potential. Keep working!
• 4/1 1:58 pm - The first track is too long. Needed to get to a SOT sooner. It was an interesting story but it felt rushed

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