A school promotional video about the Maine South varsity football team for the 2024 season and the impact football has on the student section at Maine South.
Positives: The shots are edited to the music well. The special effects are used effectively without overwhelming the rest of the video.
Improvements: I would like to see a wider variety of shots. Many of them are medium shots, and throwing in some wide establishing shots and some super tight shots would change things up. I would like to see more of a narrative element. The B-Roll is shot well but doesn't tell me a story. It would be fun if you saw football players posing or doing a dance after a touchdown when the artist sings "pose" or instance.
Positives: You've got some great footage, nice tight shots. And you mixed some crowd shots in to show the energy at the game.
Improvements: Highlight footage is fine, but video shot specifically for this project helps bring the story together. It's hard to develop a cohesive story with just disjointed contest clips and upbeat music.
Positives: The student successfully captured diverse footage of students on the field and demonstrated strong editing skills.
Improvements: To enhance the promo further, the student could have incorporated ambient sound effects and crowd cheering. Adding more reaction shots to key moments, along with these audio elements, would have created a more dynamic and engaging viewing experience.
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