Staff Step Challenge - ID# 217

Homewood-Flossmoor

News Package

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Entry Description

A 2 minute news segment showcasing the January Staff Step Challenge organized by the HFHS Wellness Committee.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/11 2:19 pm - This story did not fit the typical "News Package" category because there was no reporter track. The shots were creative, I especially liked the slow motion shot. Have your subjects look at you instead of directly into the camera and try not to interview two people at once
• 3/5 2:00 pm - Good effort! Tell your sources to look at you, not the camera. Would be better to structure this with some VO track to more effectively tell your story and improve your pacing.

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