How to Make a Fire - ID# 219
Glenbrook South
Demonstration
Entry Description
A caveman shows you how to start a fire- the modern way.
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- 4/24 8:23 am - This was funny, and the concept is clever. Your shot variety and camera work was successful, it helped to tell and push the story along. It was pieced together in an interesting way. The sound mix works well and the perspective of the cavemen and little anecdotes as he’s sharing are also clever and help add to this piece. It didn’t actually tell you how to make a fire. It just told you to go and find a source for making a fire. So, while all of the other parts are appreciated, hilarious, and done well, it needs a more practical way than telling someone to go and find a way to make it.
- 4/1 1:02 pm - Simple video, but done in a funny and creative way. Music and tone of VO fit the video well. Great job.
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