Throwback Day - ID# 210
Neuqua Valley
School Promotion
Entry Description
Created as a promotion for our homecoming week spirit day theme of "Throwback Day" where students dress as teachers and teachers dress as students.
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- 3/4 11:31 am - POSITIVES: Good job using filters on the opening shots for an old-timey look. Transition works really well to shift to full color & the ABBA look. Nice coordination of the music with the actor turning up the volume on the boom box. Great job with the audio mix. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: A bit more shot variety would help, i.e., include POV shots of the girl looking at the boys, instead of always seeing them from the side, as a bystander. Carry the transition strategy for decade change through the other 2 decades.The first one was great! The look of the last 2 decades was pretty similar--choose looks with greater contrast-- that's dependent on availability of prop clothing, but the concept could have been carried through to include hair styles, too.
- 3/3 9:59 pm - Clear attempt to connect the music, clothing throughout the eras. I would suggest transitioning shots quicker as it moves at a little bit of a slow pace. Fun concept.
- 2/18 7:53 am - -Thoughtful transition at 0:11 -Interesting concept to promote! -Acting did not feel entirely authentic, but the use of proper slang terms was a nice touch!
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