HF Lacrosse open gym - ID# 224
Homewood-Flossmoor
School Promotion Sports
Entry Description
The countdown to lacrosse season has begun.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/4 11:02 am - This is a well done promotional video! Good clips, nice music, good graphics to tell the story...overall well done!
Judge 1
Positives: Text was informative, readable and edited in to be noticeable but not obtrusive. Great footage showing the different drills and movements of the players. Piece flowed very nicely.
Improvements: It felt a little bit like watching a PSA. I know this was more for instruction than actual winning/losing but that made it a little flat. Footage could have had a few close-ups mixed in for variety (or at least been tighter to the subject).
Judge 2
Positives: Use of graphics throughout helped tell the story. Tighter shots made the video feel energetic and balanced. It never felt overcrowded or empty.
Improvements: Effects were a bit heavy and took away from the footage. Reducing effects would help the video stand out more. Text graphics are doing most of the storytelling so make sure they are easy to find and read.
Judge 3
Positives: - This was fun. Great use of a video promo for something that's a little non-traditional, but you clearly told the story and established the purpose for the video. Great job. - Camera work on all the highlights was great.
Improvements: - I really liked this so I'm getting a little nit picky... the font choice was a bit hard to read - especially using red when so much of the background in the fieldhouse was the exact same shade of red... there were times when it could have popped a bit more with a different choice. But again, that's really nit picky of me to say because I didn't see any major issues here.
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