Health Awareness - ID# 229
Homewood-Flossmoor
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
Rise to Better Health Announcement
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- 4/23 10:17 pm - Excellent use of close-ups, quick edits to drive home your point. Cool lighting on your shots. Good slogan, good ending lines. Good use of audio to emphasize your message.
- 2/26 1:51 pm - STORY: for this to have even greater impact, you would have been better off shooting footage over a series of days with different shots in the gym and in the kitchen. This felt like a single day in the life of one guy. Also, your title is Health Awareness, but the message of the video is really more about training healthy. Did the kid have a heart condition? Did his rapid weight loss trigger a stroke? We don't really know because the messaging wasn't clear. PRODUCTION: your shots were a nice mix of compositions and angles, but you needed more shot variety overall to convey the passage of time. The lighting was cool in a few of the shots; the contrast between the blue fridge light at night and the red light in the gym was interesting. Your audio levels were a bit hot on the music bed.
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