Hollister Commercial - ID# 235
Deerfield
Commercial
Entry Description
Choosing what to wear can be tough - but Hollister makes it easy.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 5:57 pm - Strongest piece was the editing showcasing the different styles of hoodies, that was nice! The beginning was a bit confusing though, I feel you could have established it differently. I feel that piece really took me out of the commercial and I wasn’t sure what I was watching until the end
- 2/26 2:40 pm - I really like the song choice and the use of the various hoodie types edited into your video. I don't think the commercial tells an effective story, or I'm not just seeing what the purpose of the character looking over at his laundry bin is. Keep working hard at developing those ideas.
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