Buckle Up, Every Trip, Every Time - ID# 236

Wheeling High School

Public Service Announcement

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Please buckle up, every trip, every time!

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• 4/23 10:20 pm - Inside the car needs to be better light so we can see the buckling better. Need to work on editing your audio so that it is seamless in the background.
• 2/26 2:36 pm - For a message to be impactful, it has to be believable. Since you couldn't really fake a car accident, you probably should have just shown everything leading up to the accident, show the driver's foot slamming on the brakes, then cut to black with the sound effect of screeching brakes and a car collision, then cut to your end screen with the flashing lights and title. Seeing the girl lurching forward in the car just wasn't believable. Also, even when a scene is meant to be at night, you still need adequate lighting to make a decent video image. Your video quality suffered because of insufficient lighting. Most of it was very noisy and grainy.

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