Cross Country Meet - ID# 239
Metea Valley
News Package
Entry Description
Overview of how Metea hosted a Cross Country meet.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 10:29 pm - This isn't a news package. It is a set of soundbites with b-roll. The subject is interesting, but I don't see a story here. The interviews are framed well, and the audio quality is good. However, without a reporter track and nat sound, it doesn't meet the news package criteria.
- 3/11 2:16 pm - This does not fit the typical "News Package" format because there is no reporter track and it's more MOS (Man of the Street) - SOTS butted together. The interviews were framed well and the shots were nice but you needed more NATS.
- 3/5 1:58 pm - This is great start. You have some good sots here, but some run long. Would be better to structure this with some VO track to more effectively tell your story and improve your pacing. Audio also runs a little hot.
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