The Bully - ID# 242
Marist
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
A bully gets his kicks pushing around an innocent victim...until the victim decides enough is enough.
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- 4/23 11:16 am - Classic concept. Easy to follow. You guys clearly had fun making this. You can tell because you hear laughing in the background in some of your shots. A couple of shots are a tad out of focus. Watch the axis line. You break the 180 degree rule at 2:30. Keep making movies!
- 4/22 2:06 pm - I think this has a lot of potential and I commend the team for working so well together. A moment that worked particularly well was the working out montage, that was a lot of fun though it went on for a bit too long. Your introduction to the Bully showed a lot of great ideas of bullying but we need to set our camera angles and try for a variety of shots, wide, medium, and tight, and then use those cuts to show other perspectives AND keep the pace of the piece going. Otherwise, everything moves just a tad to slow and almost feels like a home movie rather than a film. In the end, the pace of this could go much faster in order to get to the punchline faster.
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