Peaceable Schools Initiative - ID# 243
Lyons Township
School Promotion
Entry Description
This is a promotional video for PSI (Peaceable Schools Initiative), a club that promotes students as leaders in an effort to create a positive school climate that welcomes and celebrates all students.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/24 9:37 pm - Nice, tight clean package that has clean interview shots but lacks broll. What visuals would add to your message and compliment what is being said?
- 3/4 12:56 pm - POSITIVES: Opening OTS shot with the screen is creative. The interviews shot against the black screen look clean and are well-lit. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: Needs more B-roll that shows PSI students working together at meetings or events. Some still images are fine, but you needed more coverage that shows the club in action. The hallway clip @:53 shows... what? Interview footage should be only 20% of what you see, and then you use the audio as a VO for your B-roll, which should be 80% of your visual story. Gather more B-roll and you'd be in better shape.
- 2/19 1:23 pm - -Great talking heads footage (lighting and audio) -Suggest to include a blur and censor effects when using the still photos
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